23 Mart 2014 Pazar

SECOND DRAFT /1.COMPARISION AND CONTRAST ESSAY / SINGLE LIFE AND MARRIED LIFE / NURDAN DOĞAN

                                         

     SECOND DRAFT                                                                                              NURDAN DOĞAN    

                                           (COMPARISON AND CONTRAST ESSAY)



                                                 SINGLE LIFE AND MARRIED LIFE


                                                                OUTLINE

             There are a lot of  differences which consisted on account of diverse cultures and traditions,lifestyles,religious beliefs etc. between single and married life. (Topic sentence)

                      
                    1.0 = Diverse demands and aims of people.
1.1  = Different idea structures.
1.2  = Different points of view to married and single life.
                    2.0 = Definitions of married and single life.
                    3.0 = Comparision of responsibilities.
                    3.1 = How single people have lifestyles.
                    3.2 = How single people spend their time.
                    4.0 = How married people behaves each other.
                    4.1 = How married people have lifestyles.
                    5.0 = The purpose of marriage.
                    5.1 = Showing differences of the purpose of marriage person to person.

       Conclusion =In brief , there are differences in many aspects  between single and married life.To me , woman and man must be respectful, share their emotions and ideas each other.Ones must take a right decision.If ones want to last a lifetime marriage , they must be aware of responsibilities.

                                          SINGLE LIFE  AND MARRIED LIFE

  
                    Everybody has diverse demands in life, they want to execute their imaginations.While some of people thinks a married life after having an occupation or job , others do not think a married life directly, they want to rise academically in their occupation or think that single life is more comfortable for them. It can be defined that married life is to come together of two people who strating a family in accordance with law and mentally, physically in the way that will last a lifetime.Single life is a time which spent more individually until the married life.There are a lot of differences which consisted on account of diverse cultures and traditions,lifestyles,religious beliefs,responsibilities etc. between single and married life. Both of them have different features.In fact,the lives of married and single people differ in terms of the lifestyle and responsibility they have in life.


                         Like in the single life , woman or man has certain responsibilities in married life too.Nevertheless , single life has less responsibilities to married life.In the single life ,one behaves to his own demand or individually such as postponing  some things , forming a programme for oneself , taking a decision alone, thinking only own necessities , spending plenty of time with friends... etc.

                     On the contrary in the single life , in the married life ,woman and man behaves in collaboration with each other.It has more responsibilities such as supplying necessities of home and family, being mother or father,looking after child, providing child’s education expenses ,having a regular job.Because woman and man arrange a family which is a serious matter , there isn't an individual lifestyle anymore they have an aim.


                        The purpose of marriage shows differences from person to person.For example , finding one's true love ,bringing children into the world and providing a safe or secure environment  for them , fulfilling one's parent 's expectations.. etc.
                     
                   In brief , there are differences in many aspects between single and married life.To me,woman and man should be respectful each other.They should share their emotions and ideas each other.Ones must take a right decision.If ones want to last a lifetime marriage , they must be aware of responsibilities.


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  1. some of people thinks (sp)
    ... etc.(wrong usage)
    woman and man behaves (sp)

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